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Samantha Thiele

  • Other Poetry Re: Midwinter Loss

    Short, sweet, to the point. Only problem is I feel like this is missing something. This almost feels like a single verse rather than an entire poem. There are three ...

    Sep 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To Be Loved

    To Be Loved To be loved, when mean the world, more than life itself If only to know I meant something If only to feel the warmth of another’s soul ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I miss you

    Short, sweet and to the point. Though to make it a top rank poem ,you might want to add a little to it. To say the truth there isn't much ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A love I always had

    This poem has nice imagery, an it shouldn't matter whether it's religous or not. I for one tend to enjoy all potry no matter why it was written, or what ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Broken Glass

    Chapter One I looked around at all the faces. None of them familiar but That's how it always is. There's just no room to make friends...what difference would it make ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Have a Secret

    Vampires am I correct? Haha. You've caught my attention! Though to be dreadfully honest it doesn't fit as a creepy poem. (It could just be me, I'm really hard to ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: [currently untitled]

    The point is clear....And I'm actually glad it doesn't ryme. I can't stress how bothersome it is when people asume because it's a poem it has to ryme. (Cruse mother ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A memory

    This is very descriptive and the wording is nice. And about this not fitting under poetry, and to a point I agree. but that shouldn't stop you from formating it ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Earth is my Hell-edited

    This is a nice poem, but to be truely contructive I have to comment that the last lines don't really flow with the rest. It's clear that your trying, and ...

    Sep 5, 2008


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge